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A snowflake falls down on my arm
melting away
as it touches my bare skin.

No.

A raindrop falls from the sky
a free fall
kilometers it falls
and survives the journey.
Lands on my forehead
slides down my forehead
to the corner of my eyes.
A fake tear.

No.

A drop of milk falls from the glass
the boy overfilled
white drops falls over the edge of the glass.

No.

From the cut on my wrist
a single blood drop falls
making a red trace behind it.

No.

A white blood drop falls from my eye.

Yes.
Hi :)

Again don't ask me where this came from, it just came.
So I hope you like it :)
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Gadrac Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
wow... not bad
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ChiTorah Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you :)
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Gadrac Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
no prob
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Bamm24 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
love it
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:iconchitorah:
ChiTorah Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you and thank you again, for the :+fav:
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:iconbamm24:
Bamm24 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
no worries
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:iconchitorah:
ChiTorah Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2011  Student Writer
:)
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emo-kat14 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011  Student Writer
love it
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:iconchitorah:
ChiTorah Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you!
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heath1010 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011  Student Digital Artist
that moves me
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:iconchitorah:
ChiTorah Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you ( I couldn't really think of anything else to reply :))
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:iconheath1010:
heath1010 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2011  Student Digital Artist
your welcome:)
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:iconchitorah:
ChiTorah Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2011  Student Writer
:)
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:iconuziel-de-winther:
Uziel-De-Winther Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
a very intersting setup :) nice work though :)
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:iconchitorah:
ChiTorah Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you :)
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Uziel-De-Winther Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
yuor welcome :)
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:iconchitorah:
ChiTorah Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011  Student Writer
:)
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Niathefreak Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011
i like it :)
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:iconchitorah:
ChiTorah Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you and thank you again very much for the :+fav: :)
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Niathefreak Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011
no probs soo how r u and did u here about maria?
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:iconchitorah:
ChiTorah Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011  Student Writer
Um no i don't think so... what have happened?
And im fine thank you, what about you?
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Niathefreak Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011
i am good and glade u r to
maria`s dad made it to were she cant cheak her mail on here sooo she is thinking of deactivaing her profile :(
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:iconchitorah:
ChiTorah Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011  Student Writer
Aww that's sad :(
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:iconniathefreak:
Niathefreak Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011
it is soooo she will tell me were elase we can talk i and will tell u
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ChiTorah Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011  Student Writer
Okay thanks ^^
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